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사무실에 있는 공용부엌을 개조하려고 하는데 1개의 문제점과 2개의 요청사항을 포함해라.
예시답안 1
(요청사항) 환기시스템 설치, 예산 책정
[서론] 받는이와 인사말
Dear XX,
I am glad to learn about the plan to upgrade our office kitchen. * 문제에서 제기한 논제
[본론]
One significant issue we face is the lack of adequate ventilation, which often results in lingering cooking odors.
(요청)
I propose installing a new, high-quality range hood to improve ventilation and reduce odors.
Additionally, expanding the seating area within the kitchen would allow more employees to enjoy their meals comfortably.
Could you also consider setting aside a portion of the budget for maintaining the kitchen regularly?
This would help keep the upgraded facilities in top condition.
[결론]
Thank you for considering these improvements.
Best regards,
예시답안 2 :
(요청사항) 공간 확장과 예산 책정
Dear XX,
Thank you for addressing the need to improve our office kitchen.
At present, the kitchen area is quite cramped, making it difficult for multiple people to use it simultaneously.
I suggest expanding the kitchen area to provide more room for employees to cook comfortably. Furthermore, it would be helpful to install additional countertops to accommodate more cooking and preparation space.
Additionally, could we also increase the budget for purchasing a variety of healthy snacks and beverages? This would contribute to a healthier work environment.
I appreciate your consideration of these proposals.
Sincerely,
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